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David Kirkby's avatar

Ooooo.... so different to our Christmas here...

Not that it was all sand and sun this time - the temperature dropped from 41 C a few days ago down to 23 or 24 - but our Christmas always has a Summer vibe. The beaches were crowded.

Thanks for this glimpse of your far more frosty festivities!

D :)

NORM ROSOLEN's avatar

Your poem reminded me of a poem called "4 Seasons" I did about 5 yrs ago. Assuming your indulgence, here's the last verse:

The ice hand, white and cadaverous

reaches up and catches me, as it must

then lowers me to the precipice.

I must descend now

and though I am not in a fun mood

it is a charming view.

I amble on, aware of my Fate

and ignore the stark white spectre

buried in the in the hollow of that valley.

I clamp my eyes shut

and wish that when I open them

all will be well again.

Soon, tinkling lights emerge

and kids frolic in white fluff.

Bah, Humbug, I mutter

you can’t trick me, you Brute.

Commence your scourge

you craven Winter Solstice.

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