Sunset haiku

For the month of February, I am challenging myself to write a daily haiku about sunsets (sometimes metaphorically). I’m looking through my favourite photographs I’ve taken of sunsets, and doing my best to create a 5-7-5 haiku to go with. Nearly halfway through, I’m determined to finish out the month with a SUNSET HAIKU every day. I’ve been posting them on NOTES, which you can check out here: My Notes

I’m just sayin’, it would be fun to get some feedback on your favourite or if any of them hit. I’d also love to read your own version of a sunset haiku.

I’m posting the ones that have got the most likes so far here:

Crimson ball explodes

At the bottom of my dreams

Leaves me in the dark

I lost sight of you

In a flood of memories

As the sun went down

Rocks absorb the light

The way my heart hears your love

Night won’t extinguish

As the sun went down

I opened my heart for you

And you slipped away

Having oft crossed seas

Sailing fair and rough, I still

Delight in sundowns

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Thank you for reading. Hope you enjoyed all or some of them. Would love any and all feedback.

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